Recent content by Carlo Reedo

Aus fell down on his but. The pandemonium finally eased and he felt he could cut some slack. He did his part, or at the very least did the motions, therefore he cannot be blamed for doing nothing. "This guys are a crazy bunch," he whispered, drifting his gaze towards the blood thirsty party. He...

//I think she hopped back to the beginning. Skimmed through the middle while doing some character exposition. Then finaly reacting to the current event. @Mellsplosion It might be a good Idea to split that into one paragraph per scene.

Heat entered through his shoulders and flowed through the rest of his body. He was flabbergasted. He looked to the side and saw Lilith. He didn't quite understand what was going on, but he felt strength returning to his limbs. He nodded, "Thanks Lilliana," before dashing forward. In a rush of...

---Aus------- When he came to himself, he felt the world spin relentlessly, and all he could hear was a sharp shrill noise. Aus's hand gripped on a chair as he staggered to stand, but he was brought to his knees and hands as it toppled down. He hadn't felt this bad since he first snuck out to...

---Aus------- The time the creatures began to appear, Aus immediately reacted and stood. However, his sudden movements caught the attention of one of the creatures. He felt its gaze towards him and quivered. He moved back, but his legs caught on to the chair. He stumbled but was able to recover...

"Hey, miss elf. What do you think about the situation?" Aus stayed seated amidst the commotion, but from underneath the table, his left hand stroked the cold metal locket of a scabbard. Things have begun to escalate. He did notice the man by the fire, but he thought thought it would be normal...

"Yeah entertain the knife twirler," He grabbed the letter, giving it a cursory glance before turning at Shozu and said, "The guy snuck in my house and left it by my window sill. Whoever it was should have the skills to be well loaded." He brought the paper beside his own, flipped them over...

Aus smile crumbled. He gathered his belongings and stored them back. It seems that he was not the only one that got the invitation this time. His eyes flickered towards Lilian and Ardyn, then towards the twins and the knife twirler. "It might be a coincidence, or maybe not, but I've also...

---Aus---------- "It's Aus, a difficult name to pronounce, I know. But the capital huh," his gaze shifts towards the soft patters of a small critter coming in too close. However, it scampered away before he could react. Moving his attention back into the conversation, he replied, pointing at...

---Aus-------- For a moment, the music seemed to pause, and the chatters softened. By this time, the other guests' were looking this way. He noticed this and was jolted up. Then, noticing that someone was talking to him, his dark eyes shifted upwards. Someone unfamiliar appeared. A trace of...

---Aus------- Sitting by the corner table was a young man in his late teens. Leaning his head with his arm, he gazes deeply at his cup as he stirs the milk with his finger. The swooshing sound soothed him and brought him to a land free of care. However, that moment was shortly drowned by the...

We'll be waiting, don't feel too pressured.

Hey there, welcome to the group as well. Perhaps we'll be in the same adventure some time.