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Quirk: Muscle Enlarged Augmentation A Transformation Type Quirk: Muscle Augmentation is a Quirk that make Kuma be able to augment the muscle fibers that are beneath his skin, increasing the power and speed of his movements. When using this Quirk, the enhanced muscle fibers protrude from and cover the skin of the area that is being augmented greatly increase in size

As an example of a more complex strength-enhancement Quirk, Muscle Enlarged Augmentation can be used to attack and defend in a number of different ways. As well as simply augmenting Kuma's strength and speed, he is also seemingly able to control his muscle strands individually, utilizing them for more refined attacks, such as crushing crushing a enemies limb or weapon when it's caught in augmented muscles or using his muscles like springs that could absorb a great deal of physical shock and snap it back. Additionally, Kuma can increase the size of augmented muscles which results in a greater increase of strength and durability in exchanged for speed because of the extra weight while he can enlarge certain parts of his body.

This Quirk improves as it requires the user to having to do large amounts of harsh and rigorous physical training so that Kuma's muscles will grow in mass and strength which leads to his quirk's muscle augmentation becoming far more stronger.
There are weaknesses in this quirk, the first is that whenever Kuma fights beyond his current limit of ability, his body can't contain the destructive power which cause his muscles to be torn apart and his bones to shatter. Kuma also can't exceed a certain level of enlargement if he does try to exceed the limit, the muscles fibers will begin to tear themselves appear which can result in damage that will take along time to heal.

Kuma's current level of muscle augmentation level, increase mass allowance and power usage at the moment is at 1%, Kuma`s reckless and wild-self means he has a habit of causing destruction or breaking things by accident. Where is that this Quirk also has a time limit of 1 hour where Kuma can continuously use his powers freely.
Muscle Enlarge Augmentation enables Kuma to have superhuman strength at destructive levels, increased agility, superhuman speed while having an increasing his overall durability. It enable him to thrown around 500 lbs with some difficult at the moment, much higher pain tolerance compared to normal humans, faster reaction time/speed than the average human and sprinting at speeds of 21.2 miles per hour.

A strange part of the Quirk is that whenever Kuma attacks a organic bodies, his strength doesn't resonance as well which means his attack power is greatly reduced as he can't destroy someone's body with a single blow but he still punches hard. His power however functions at full force when he attacks something that isn't organic and it can be told apart whenever his limbs that are augmented begin to glow, if he attacks something that is't alive, the muscle fibers will glow a fiery orange but if he is attacking something that is alive, it won't glow.
okay i think that muscle augmenting makes a LOT more sense than before. personally im fine with it, all up to idea now Idea Idea
 
using his muscles like springs that could absorb a great deal of physical shock and snap it back.
how does this relate to enlarging his muscles?
faster reaction time/speed than the average human
again, how does this relate to enlarging muscles?
increased agility
i did some researching, and with larger muscles, there will be lots of resistance and tension within the body. meaning, if you have massive lats, it may slow punches down. big triceps slow down biceps (will not operate as quickly as it would), same thing with legs. muscles are strong and stiff, so there would be LOTS of resistance for other parts of the body. the bigger you are, the more weight you have to move, making you slower.

while speed DOES require muscle, making it too much will do the opposite.
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larger muscles will indeed make a person more tired. not enough oxygen and energy in a human body to keep up with the demand of huge muscles. so, as you do stuff/train, you will get tired more quickly. the bigger you are, the more weight you have to move. especially if you're augmenting the upper body more than the lower body.

i understand you mentioned the whole speed decrease in your quirk, but there's just some more information that you might want to take into consideration as you continue to improve it more.

If Kuma enlarges the size of his augmented muscles,
im assuming this means that he's doubling the power already, going beyond the limit of what you said earlier?
 
how does this relate to enlarging his muscles?

again, how does this relate to enlarging muscles?

i did some researching, and with larger muscles, there will be lots of resistance and tension within the body. meaning, if you have massive lats, it may slow punches down. big triceps slow down biceps (will not operate as quickly as it would), same thing with legs. muscles are strong and stiff, so there would be LOTS of resistance for other parts of the body. the bigger you are, the more weight you have to move, making you slower.

while speed DOES require muscle, making it too much will do the opposite.
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larger muscles will indeed make a person more tired. not enough oxygen and energy in a human body to keep up with the demand of huge muscles. so, as you do stuff/train, you will get tired more quickly. the bigger you are, the more weight you have to move. especially if you're augmenting the upper body more than the lower body.

i understand you mentioned the whole speed decrease in your quirk, but there's just some more information that you might want to take into consideration as you continue to improve it more.


i'm assuming this means that he's doubling the power already, going beyond the limit of what you said earlier?
Ah, gotcha but if you are asking some questions. This isn't just muscle enlargement, it's Muscle Enlargement Augmentation so it would lead to Kuma having acquired a faster reaction because he would have gotten to his ability to move at faster speeds which would have lead to him being like that.

I'll remove the spring and snap back function as i'll put down, "can withstand very damaging attacks from various types of sources." ...Oh yeah. i almost forgot but Kuma AUGMENTED BOTH UPPER AND LOWER equally. If you are wondering why i might have seemed mad was because i hate it alittle when people think i or my characters focus on their upper body more than their lower. Augmenting his legs will result increasing vertical which can be used in the form of powerful pounces or something like that, i'll figure stuff.
 
yuckeroni yuckeroni If you are at all confused about how it works, search Muscle Augmentation and for Boku no Hero Academia. There is a villain in the manga who has a similar quirk if not exactly the same without certain kinds of features but i'll still figure stuff to make sure it works out with you.
 
Name: Daisuke Hashimoto
Desired Hero Name: Un-Dai-sputed

Quote: "The devil is not as black as he's often painted.....that felt much too edgy for my liking."

Age: 16
Gender: M
Chosen Extra Class: Mentoring
Appearance: c1063cc70bdea55a7b41e9632c533029--dark-anime-guys-hot-anime.jpg
Height: 5'5
Weight: 176
Personality:

Daisuke is careful and analytical teen who, just like his mom, prides himself on being a effective thinker. For the most part, he is, excelling at school (Particularly laws and regulation), being the voice of reason and a pretty good mentor somebody his age group, and being an overall bright kid. Furthermore, Daisuke is well prepared for nearly everything, scheduling his daily life down to the time he goes to bed at night, he has a clear-cut idea of where he'll find himself in 10 years. However, Dai very, very, very, VERY rarely strays from this set path and when something doesn't go perfectly as planned, Daisuke has an extremely hard time adapting and modifying to the unforeseen circumstances and isn't very good at off-the-cuff thinking nor does he have the willingness to take any blind risks. Generally, Daisuke is very reserved and rather nice to his fellow students, offering little words of advice and offering tutoring to anyone who needs
it. However, Dai is blunt and doesn't pull punches with his statements and or criticisms, he also outright refuses to be someone's doormat and is very stubborn and prideful once push comes to shove. Additionally, while he tries his best to be understanding and accepting of everyone around him, due to having little real life experience outside of Ikebukuro, Daisuke is easily shaken by things outside his comfort zone and tends to panic when put into these situations. As a hero, Daisuke usually falls under the role of the tactician, having the ability to create plans and schemes that, if done without fail, will also always put he or his group in a favorable position. These characteristics often exemplify themselves in combat or any physical activities in general. Whilst fighting, Daisuke follows a common pattern, moving at a slow and steady pace to avoid overexertion, letting his opposition come to him rather than being aggressive himself, picking a body part based on his opponents fighting style or prior injuries and zoning in on it, etc. However, Daisuke often struggles on his lonesome, this due to his timidness while in combat, his lack of an overpowering quirk, and, while being very athletic overall,not being particularly talented at just one attribute.

Likes: Bell peppers and beef
Clever jokes
Sustaining/expanding his knowledge
Behavioral discipline

Dislikes: Corporate pop-stars
Disrespectful or outright rude behavior
Criminals/Vigilantes
Greedy business practices


Fears: Sustaining a life altering injury
Freak accidents

Mannerisms: Tends to pause a bunch mid-sentence, stopping to think about each and every word before saying it.

Backstory: {S}


Relationships: Mana Hashimoto (Mother): Dai has a great relationship with his mom as well as heap admiration for her due to the difficulty of her job as a private investigator. Mana was usually the one looking over him, his father's work as a hero prevented him from being home regularly and as such his mother took the brunt of responsibilities at home. Mana is quirkless.

Ryota Hashimoto (Father): Although he wasn't around the house majority of the time, he and his son's relationship is still strong. Ryota was in fact, the reason Daisuke decided to become a hero, instead of working elsewhere. Ryota's quirk, one that Daisuke inherited, has been passed for generations in their family, it's the same quirk as Dai without the drawbacks and limitations that his son currently possess.

Quirk: Primal instinct: After taking a sustaining a heavy amount blood loss of physical damage from the head, the users strength, speed, reflexes, smell, and sight are increased to the level of a wild animal's (think a wolf or a fox), Additionally, any injuries sustained 5 mins before the quirks activation will slowly heal. However, said user's perception, cognition, intelligence, and sense of self drastically decrease, making it easy for the person to lose control of the quirk. Furthermore, healing during this time period (about 5 mins) will never completely heal an serious or otherwise fatal injury. This quirk lasts a little less then five minutes and can not be used for another hour afterwards, no matter how hurt the user gets during that time frame.

Special Moves: None at the moment

Items: Other than school essentials (Bookbag, pencils, notebooks, etc. ) nothing in particular.

Skills/talents:
Checkers
Reading
RPG Video Games
Fighting (particularly Brazilian-Jiu-Jitsu and Mat Wrestling)

Hero Costume: As of right now, his hero attire is just a black, Dri-fit t-shirt with the words "Plus Extra" emblazoned in blue in the center, black jogging pants, and black tennis shoes. (This was all that he had on during the time of the entrance exam)

Theme song:
 
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This isn't just muscle enlargement, it's Muscle Enlargement Augmentation so it would lead to Kuma having acquired a faster reaction because he would have gotten to his ability to move at faster speeds which would have lead to him being like that.
hmm okay, this whole time i believed that his muscles only enlarged, my bad.

"can withstand very damaging attacks from various types of sources."
fine by me

If you are at all confused about how it works,
wasn't confused, just a misunderstanding on my part

Oh yeah. i almost forgot but Kuma AUGMENTED BOTH UPPER AND LOWER equally. If you are wondering why i might have seemed mad was because i hate it alittle when people think i or my characters focus on their upper body more than their lower. Augmenting his legs will result increasing vertical which can be used in the form of powerful pounces or something like that, i'll figure stuff.
i wasn't insinuating that he didn't augment his lower body at all. however, this does raise a few more questions. does the augmentation spread throughout the whole body, equally, at the same time? (just pretty much enlarging his WHOLE body) or can he change individual muscles? if it worked individually, that's why i threw that information at you. but if it's basically like All Might where he flexes his whole body, then please add that into your description, whichever way it works.

just clarify my last few questions and i think we'll be almost done here :3
 
Name: Daisuke Hashimoto
Desired Hero Name: Un-Dai-sputed
Age: 16
Gender: M
Chosen Extra Class: Mentoring
Appearance: View attachment 340266
(soon to be) Hero Costume: {S}
Height: 5'5
Weight: 176
Personality: Calm and to the point, Daisuke is very analytical and observant person. Much of his personality comes from his mom, Mana, whom he spend the most time with while growing up. Mana, a private investigator, taught a Dai a lot about her career, making a point to teaching him about critical thinking that her job requires. In public, Daisuke plays it very close to the vest, he's not very expressive when comes to activities and subjects he likes, he doesn't enjoy being around big groups of people and often tries to avoid talking unless directly spoken too. His views on crime haven't really changed over the course of his life and as such Daisuke holds an extremely black and white view of the world. He refuses to sympathise or understand criminals, no matter what there motives maybe be, believing that anyone who disrupts the accepted status quo is harmful to society as a whole.

Likes: Bell peppers and beef
Clever jokes
Creative thinking
Discipline

Dislikes: Corporate pop-stars
Disrespectful or outright rude behavior
Criminals/Vigilantes
Pay-to-win games


Fears: Sustaining a life altering injury
Freak accidents

Mannerisms: Tends to lightly lend on people he considers a friend with his head and or body.

Backstory: {S}


Relationships: Mana Hashimoto (Mother): Daisie has a great relationship with his mom as well as heap admiration for her due to the difficulty of her job. Mana was usually the one looking over him, his father work as a hero prevented him from being home regularly and as such his mother took the brunt of responsibilities at home. Mana is worthless.

Ryota Hashimoto (Father): Although he wasn't around the house majority of the time, he and his son relationship is still strong. Ryota was in fact, the reason Daisuke decided to become a hero, instead of working elsewhere. Ryota's quirk, one that Daisuke inherited, is has been passed for generations in their family, it's the same quirk as Dai without the drawbacks and limitations that his son currently possess.

Quirk: Primal instinct: After taking a significant amount of physical damage (a reliable indicator is heavy blood loss), the users strength, speed, reflexes, smell, and sight are increased to the level of a wild animal's (think a wolf or a fox), Additionally, any injuries sustained 5 mins before the quirks activation will slowly heal. However, said user's perception, cognition, intelligence, and sense of self drastically decrease, making it easy for the person to lose control of the quirk. Furthermore, healing during this time period (about 5 mins) will never completely heal an serious or otherwise fatal injury. This quirk lasts a little less then five minutes and can not be used for another hour afterwards, no matter how hurt the user gets during that time frame.
Special Moves: {S}
Items: (anything your character brought with them to the dorms and anything they usually carry) {S}
Skills/talents:​
Personality is underflawed and one dimensional. We only see one aspect of the character and it's only flaw leaves me on the fence on whether I can consider it a serious flaw

I need you to be more concrete regarding the necessary amount of damage

You did not Pm me the secret stuff
 

Enton Reiji
Hero-saurus

The quickest way to anything's heart is it's stomach.
Enton Reiji

  • Age:
    16
    Gender:
    Male
    Appearance:
    Enton has curly blonde hair with a few patches of brown hair. He has hazel eyes and short eyelashes, with slightly pale skin. The rest of his features are average sized, except for his teeth, which are larger than average.
    Hero Costume:
    His costume is just a leather padded blue boiler suit with holes for any appendages he might grow with his quirk. (i.e his back, the bottoms of his arms, etc.)
    Likes:
    Foods made from potatoes.
    Card games.
    Nature documentaries.
    Video Games.
    Dislikes:
    Really hot/spicy foods (i.e peppers, red Doritos, etc.)
    Birds.
    Really hot weather.
    People who are really loud and annoying.
    Favorites:
    {S}
    Cats are his favorite currently existing animals.
    His favorite Dinosaur (and mutation) is the Therizinosaurus.
    Mannerisms:
    If he's interrupted by someone while talking, he'll instinctively pause.
    Items:
    A plastic figure of a Therizinosaurus, which is more than 10 years old.
    A photo of him with his cat and family.
    A phone with secret contents.

    Themes:
    Normal Battle Theme

    Serious Battle Theme


    Extra Class:
    General Studies
    Fears:
    {S}
    Relationships:
    He's on pretty good terms with his family.
    He loves his cat, and she loves him too.
    Skills/Talents:
    He's really good with puzzles, as long as they're not slide puzzles.
    He's great with aiming his hits.



The personality desperately lacking in serious flaws.

I'm gonna have to ask you to make a list of all possible combinations (as in , a limited amount) or alter the condition of the quirk. As it stands, the quirk is over-versatile


What's up with the dream thing in the backstory? What does a weird dream have to do with anything?
 
hmm okay, this whole time i believed that his muscles only enlarged, my bad.


fine by me


wasn't confused, just a misunderstanding on my part


i wasn't insinuating that he didn't augment his lower body at all. however, this does raise a few more questions. does the augmentation spread throughout the whole body, equally, at the same time? (just pretty much enlarging his WHOLE body) or can he change individual muscles? if it worked individually, that's why i threw that information at you. but if it's basically like All Might where he flexes his whole body, then please add that into your description, whichever way it works.

just clarify my last few questions and i think we'll be almost done here :3
Sorry about that, i didn't know you were having a misunderstanding but Kuma can augmented individual muscles in his body so tell me what i need to add in now, please.
 
Quote:
"Lets get this over with. It's lunchtime and I have a hearty appetite."
Name:
Kuba Koryusai
Nicknames:
Steak man
Desired Hero Name: {S}
Slymer
Age:
16
Gender:
Male
Chosen Extra Class:
General studies
Appearance:
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(soon to be) Hero Costume:
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Has a utility belt that contains some basics for stealth like smoke pellets, Bolas. he also has small plates of armor around his knee caps, shoulders, and fists. Each of these plates have some spikes on them to help deal some additional damage.
Height:
5'8
Weight:
168
Personality:
At first glance you can see Kuba as athletic, absent minded, and quiet. When you get to know him and he opens up, you learn that he is a solemn, prideful, and kind person . however this kid can't hold still if his life depends on it, this is mostly do to his ADHD. He has a hard time focusing in class, easily bored with subjects that he's not into, tho he tries his best to listen carefully if he can help himself. He also can't help but move at least one part of his body, otherwise he goes completely crazy. which is why he has a gripper to keep his body busy. If he doesn't have something to occupy him while holding still then he becomes impatient and begins to make loud tapping sounds with either his feet or fingers. Usually a lot people find this annoying and yell at him to stop, which he does but ends up doing it again after a few minutes. However his dedication and energy to working out and aiming for better improvement is notable. He's known to be pretty focused and tense when engaging physical training. He has a no fooling around policy when it comes to training, and even outside. He also doesn't waste time to be bluntly be honest with someone , if he hates the named person he'll go ahead and say it without any second thoughts. He will be upfront with you without thinking about your feelings. He also is known to be audacious as he has at times known to be disobedient when it came to helping a friend or close one. Like his friend Yasui he was always a target for bullying, which Kuba despises above all else. Willing to use his quirk despite breaking the rules and facing the consequences later.

He's also known not to be the brightest kid when it comes to academics and likes to be by himself. sometimes he's seen in class taking a nap in which case the teachers come and whack him on the head. He does his best to actually learn something and even engage in those lessons. But he most often forgets names and other essential information's so relying on him to remember is a no go since he struggles to bring out tid bits of what he remembers. His best subject however is history as those foretell the stories of great events of humankind and heroes. He usually keeps a history book dating as far as ancient times to read in his spare time. Any other subject tho he is only mediocre. Another book he has is his "Grudge book" which is a small leather handbook that he keeps on him where he writes down the name of those who he has a grudge. If someone wrongly does something that angers him tremendously, he writes that persons name. When he has a grudge on someone, it's to the point where he will not attempt to aid that person until they properly apologize for what they specifically did. Even telling every detail of what they did in order for him him to be satisfied.

It is known only by Yasui that Kuba envies generally everyone. He envies those who are very intelligent and can explain/understand things in a broader way. He feels drawn to them and can't help but feel belittled and hopeless. He may not express it but he thinks about it. He is self-conscious about his own intellect and doesn't like being made fun because of it. Those who do find themselves with a roundhouse kick to the face or a good fashioned full strength slap to the face.

Kuba also has a prideful side of him that doesn't make him back down when someone comes to shove. He prefers to fight one on one and doesn't like receiving help from others. His one golden rule is that no one is to interfere in his fight if someone challenges him. Like his father he prefers to fight with everything he's got when he meets a worthy opponent. That one rule however is overturned when those he cares the most are in danger, in which he swallows his pride to accept others help. Before fighting a strong opponent he usually gives off a sort of overconfidence, underestimating his opponents and believing that his battle is easy. He can of course get a bit hot headed when his opponents taunt him about his height or is beating him, which he then slowly starts to become reckless and oblivious to his surrounding. Taking daring actions that may backfire on him or possibly work in his favor. He becomes fixated on taking out his target before anything bad happens which ironically he only progresses future damage that he wishes to avoid.
Likes:
Food
working out
fighting strong opponents
helping out wherever he can
cats
baseball

Dislikes:
Soccer
Villians
cocky people
people making fun of his height
people pestering about his quirk
studying
being beaten in combat


Fears:
Losing those who he deems close
Losing himself

Mannerisms:
Always has a hand gripper to help keep him focused

Backstory:
Kuba was born on U.S soil in the state of Louisiana. His mother was the state champion within the Womens UFC. She even went to compete nationwide and got 1st place in her first tournament. After that tho she retired and decided to move the family to japan where Kuba's father was working as a hero. During his childhood his mother spent most of her time training Kuba in some martial arts and starting easy in physical training and thus picking it up as Kuba grew up. When he got old enough to take on heavier weights she decided to take Kuba to her gym and personally trained in all sorts of physical workouts. Of course having a mother who was also a nutritionist helped a lot. Whenever he wanted to train with his quirk he would ask his dad to help out which he gladly obliged whenever he had time.

When he started elementary school he was known to be very kind and was one of the first of kids to offer help in any sort of way to the teachers or volunteering to be someone's partner. He always got along with everyone, but some kids saw him as a nuisance. There were times when kids would attempt to fight him or pick on him. But usually he just ends up telling on them and informing the teachers that certain kids were trying to incite violence. When he was actually forced to fight, he would resort to using his quirk and thus barely winning or just running away.

When he was in middle school he moved to the city of musutafu things again got a bit hectic. When he was asked about his quirk he didn't want to say and thus rumors began about him being quirkless. It was put down to rest when he finally decided to show a bit of his quirk by turning only his feet to the venomous suit and walking up on the school walls for just a minute (He got in trouble and given detention for a week). At that point people finally left him alone and became more friendly with him. He didn't like that about people, having to have high expectation on someone's quirk and it having to determine that your a somebody.

Then in High school he met Yasui who happened to be a quirkless guy. Both were into sports and working out so they kinda hit it off pretty well. Everyone else saw this strange since he was mostly hanging out with a weakling. But he didn't care and he resumed his everyday life of working out, hanging out with Yasui, getting ok grades and finally getting to his junior year in one piece. The thing that everyone knows is that Kuba isn't really a smart kid when it comes to academics, but when his chances of going to Hero academia was on the line. He puts his heart and soul into studying, when he has a goal he makes sure that he gives his all. Yasui of course pitched in to help him study, tho in his description it was: "Like teaching a goldfish". In the end he managed to pass (barely) his exams. Now he has the opportunity to join the Hero Academia where he can achieve his dream of becoming a hero!

Relationships:

Misuki Koryusai- Mother of Kuba and a former U.S MMA fighter. She's known for her sticky goo like form in which she can shape to her desire. She also owns her own gym within Musutafu. (Her Father had chameleon like powers, so possibly that is the reason Kuba has a long tongue when using his suit)

Tazawa Koryusai- A Hero who has the quirk of "Bull" which grants him super strength but can expand it by expanding his muscle mass but slows him down.

Takai Koryusai-Annoying little sister who has a quirk climb walls and change color.

Yasui Kei- His best friend that has been with him since Freshman High school. He's known to have no quirk but is a funny and reliable friend. Both him and Kuba look at each other as brothers.



Quirk:
Slime suit: Kuba when not being able to defeat his opponents in his normal physical form, transforms into his humanoid slime form. This slime suit allows Kuba to stick to walls and climb, swallow outside materials to increase his attacks/defense like inserting stone into his body and placing it around his fist to do some extra damage or spit it out at his enemies. Plus he can swallow objects or things that are the size of a dog (full grown shepherd size or toddler) at a maximum weight of 180 lbs, tho he can carry this large weight it does weigh him down costing him a lot of mobility depending on what he has swallowed. Kuba may also manipulate his body for ranged attacks like tentacles to whip at enemies or grab at a range of 10 feet, or throw some of his slime at his opponents to slow them down or capture. His slime form can also grow to increase his strength and ranged attacks for the cost of mobility and speed. His slime is still prone to physical damages do to his body being converted only to 80% Slime and 20% Human (His tongue and teeth are proof).
His major weaknesses include fire which will cause his body to liquefy and hurt any internal organs within, electricity which mainly hurts the organs within, and extreme cold which causes the slime suit to become less mobile and fast.
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Special Moves:
All or nothing: Utilizing every part of his body he quickly assembles about 20 slim like slime tentacles and begins to assault his opponent. Quickly attempting to cause some damage and then aiming for the limbs to ensnare, which he then proceeds to quickly throw as many punches and whip attacks as he can on the opponent. After this move tho he is winded and his speed is cut in half, unless he gets proper rest he can't move as quickly as before the move.

Items:
A gripper, a bunch of snacks, and a compass

Skills/talents:
(in training still) Mix martial arts
Is good with directions and maps

Theme Song:
(Just for hype reasons)
 

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Quote:
"Lets get this over with! It's lunchtime and I have a hearty appetite!"
Name:
Kuba Koryusai
Nicknames:
Steak man
Desired Hero Name: {S}
Venomous
Age:
16
Gender:
Male
Chosen Extra Class:
General studies
Appearance:
(soon to be) Hero Costume:
Has a utility belt that contains some basics for stealth, and some armored plates with spikes to do some additional damage or protection when not using his quirk.
Height:
5'8
Weight:
168
Personality:
Hardworking, dedicated, and most importantly is selfless. Kuba is known to be an athletic person who loves to exercise and physically train himself. He may not be the smartest kid in the class with average grades, but he makes it up for his tenacity for self improvement and being a motivator to others. Because of that he considers himself a good training partner, going as far as asking a bunch of questions of said partner like diets, how many times they work out in a week, measurements, and etc. Also of course because he's always on some workout schedule, he consumes 5 times more of the average human recommended calorie intakes. He can be seen at lunchtime to have large containers of a variety of vegetables, meat, and a ridiculous amount of rice.

One major thing about him in the social skills is that he is completely clueless with girls. In the past he's had several accounts of girls showing obvious signs of them liking him and he never notices the messages. Tho he would eventually catch on by a violent push to the right direction but by the time that happens those girls become completely pissed off and he ends up getting beaten up and feeling bad. Despite his social weakness with women he has a very friendly personality and is always willing to put up with the most annoying or most agitating person. Tho he won't tolerate those who are wanting pick a fight for no reason.
Likes:
Food
working out
fighting strong opponents
helping out wherever he can
cats
baseball

Dislikes:
Soccer
Villians
cocky people
people making fun of his height
lazy people
people pestering about his quirk

Fears:
Losing those who he deems close
Losing himself

Mannerisms:
Always has a hand gripper to help keep him focused

Backstory:
Kuba was born on U.S soil in the state of Louisiana. His mother was the state champion within the Womens UFC. She even went to compete nationwide and got 1st place in her first tournament. After that tho she retired and decided to move the family to japan where Kuba's father was working as a hero. During his childhood his mother spent most of her time training Kuba in some martial arts and extreme physical training. Many of those who knew the Koryusai family saw this as a bit over the top and dangerous for such a young child. After all he started doing this physical training as early as the age of 5. However Kuba saw this as a fun activity and a good opportunity to hang out with his mother, sometimes even his father would come to train along with them and show off his strength. This has inspired him to become hero.

When he started elementary school he was known to be very kind and was one of the first of kids to offer help in any sort of way to the teachers or volunteering to be someone's partner. He always got along with everyone, but some kids saw him as a nuisance. There were times when kids would attempt to fight him or pick on him. But usually he just ends up telling on them and informing the teachers that certain kids were trying to incite violence. When he was actually forced to fight, he was usually the last one standing and the fights ended quickly. Even when he had finally discovered his quirk he never really bothered to show it off or use it as he had relied on his physical strength.

During middle school things got a bit more hectic as some people speculated that he had no quirk since he never used it. It was put down to rest when he finally decided to show a bit of his quirk by turning only his feet to the venomous suit and walking up on the school walls for just a minute (He got in trouble and given detention for a week). At that point people finally left him alone and became more friendly with him. He didn't like that about people, having to have high expectation on someone's quirk and it having to determine that your a somebody.

Then in High school he met Yasui who happened to be a quirkless guy. Both were into sports and working out so they kinda hit it off pretty well. Everyone else saw this strange since he was mostly hanging out with a weakling. But he didn't care and he resumed his everyday life of working out, hanging out with Yasui, getting ok grades and finally getting to his junior year in one piece. The thing that everyone knows is that Kuba isn't really a smart kid when it comes to academics, but when his chances of going to Hero academia was on the line. He puts his heart and soul into studying, when he has a goal he makes sure that he gives his all. Yasui of course pitched in to help him study, tho in his description it was: "Like teaching a goldfish". In the end he managed to pass (barely) his exams. Now he has the opportunity to join the Hero Academia where he can achieve his dream of becoming a hero!

Relationships:

Misuki Koryusai- Mother of Kuba and a former U.S MMA fighter. She's known for her sticky goo like form in which she can shape to her desire. She also owns her own gym within Musutafu. (Her Father had chameleon like powers, so possibly that is the reason Kuba has a long tongue when using his suit)

Tazawa Koryusai- A Hero who has the quirk of "Bull" which grants him super strength but can expand it by expanding his muscle mass but slows him down.

Takai Koryusai-Annoying little sister who has a quirk climb walls and change color.

Yasui Kei- His best friend that has been with him since Freshman High school. He's known to have no quirk but is a funny and reliable friend. Both him and Kuba look at each other as brothers.



Quirk:
Venomous suit: Kuba when not being able to defeat his opponents in his normal physical form, transforms into his venomous suit. This suit transforms his body into a goo like substance that allows him to climb/run up walls, ensnare targets or suck them into his suit. Enhance his strength, speed, and agility. Even turning parts of his body into sharp weapons likes spikes, blades, or having claws. He can also expand his body to increase more strength at the cost of agility and speed. However increase of the body causes more stress to the brain which increases Cortisol and Ghrelin hormones (Anger and Hunger). Tho he has not gone to a serious phase, it has been noted by his parents that he is to avoid trying to increase his strength. Oh also he has a long tongue that is seen always sticking out, it can also be used to ensnare opponents at a distance of 2 feet away. Despite all its good feats it also has weaknesses other then the change of hormones from expansion. It is also weak against fire and electricity.
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Special Moves:
All or nothing: Utilizing every part of his body he quickly assembles about 20 slim like goo tentacles and begins to assault his opponent. Quickly attempting to cause some damage and then aiming for the limbs to ensnare, which he then proceeds to quickly throw as many punches and whip attacks as he can on the opponent.

Items:
A gripper, a bunch of snacks, and a compass

Skills/talents:
Mix martial arts
Is good with directions and maps

Theme Song:
(Just for hype reasons)


As it stands, that personality is a Gary Stu. You are in desperate need to add serious flaws.

In that backstory, you're telling me that this peace-loving, adult-resorting kid was strong enough to quickly win a free for all or worse even, a fight were people ganged up on him? And later he could do this against quirked people without even using his quirk? You're really breaking my suspension of disbelief there buddy.

Mixed martial arts as a skill isn't too big a deal, but it does have a few problems. First, if he was that strong in the backstory then he'd have no reason to learn them and this doesn't seem like the type who'd just go and do it. In fact there is no mention of him learning martial arts in the backstory. Next specifically mixed martial arts is a bit of an issue. That a kid this young would know multiple martial arts well enough to mix them is a bit too much of a stretch.


The quirk seems to imply some form of venom, but there is no mention of a power like that. So does it have any kind of effect like that?
Then again, the quirk is already too versatile. It simply does too many things, and the weaknesses are really not significant enough to justify it. It could be that the individual effects are so poorly performed that variety becomes almost meaningless, but I doubt that's the idea you were going for (which was to quirk-copy-cat venom I imagine, a bit like Comet Comet on page 1)
 

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