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All according to my Scenario
I have an idea for a roleplay where random people all over the world suddenly obtain the ability to mentally command a single kaiju from a mysterious being. Teenage kids, mobsters, government officials, hoboes, multi-millionaires, anyone could have a new pet. Anyone could level a city with a thought.

Anyone could rule the world...

A combination of strategy, setting-building and giant monsters slugging it out over the ruins of cities at the behest of madmen.

If you’re interested, send me a sheet! I’ll gladly explain the rules in further detail.
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Character Sheet
Name:

Country of Origin:

Ethnicity:

Image/Appearance:

Age:

Gender:

Personality: 2-3 paragraphs or so. Bring up your character’s morals and suchlike- are they willing to kill, or do they avoid destroying inhabited areas?

Backstory: A paragraph or two about who your character was before they got a monster.

Goals: 3-4 goals, of varying importance. What does your character want to do with their monster? This area’ll likely change as the game progresses.

Opinions on other people with monsters: Just a general view on people who have similar or different goals to you.

Opinions on your monster: Do you love it, or see it as only a means to an end? Do you consider your power a curse, or a blessing?

Home Base: Can be anything from a shack in the woods to a sprawling mansion.

Monster Sheet
Name:

Appearance: Feel free to go wild with this, although all kaiju must be natural in appearance (aside from integrated metallic parts, like metal spikes or plating.)

Size: In the region of 40-60 meters tall, unless snakelike or similar. Max length is 150 meters, possibly longer for snake kaiju. Talk to me if you have any questions.

Attacks: More or less as follows, write down some means of attack your beast has. Please refrain from excessive energy weapons or similar, as that would more likely be a special attack. If your kaiju has unusual limb arrangements, feel free to compensate by rewriting it, but no more than four attack types, and no more than two energy attacks. More can be obtained as your monster develops and mutates.
  • Mouth Attack:
  • Claw Attack:
  • Foot Attack:
  • Special Attack:
Strengths: General things that make your life easier, such as fighting in water for a sea kaiju, or darkness for a blind kaiju. Or even odd biological features like gills, wings, or armor. Simply anything non-offensive that benefits your beastie.

Weaknesses: Things that weaken your monster, such as heat for an ice kaiju. Or perhaps lighting is your weakness? Could even be a terrain type your kaiju founders in.

Place of Emergence: All Kaiju come from either a place deep below the sea, or buried underground, or even from space. Where did yours come from?
 
Oooooh, I would absolutely love to join this!!!!!!!
 
JAMIE MASON- NPC
Character Sheet
Name: Jamie Mason

Country of Origin: Britain

Ethnicity: Irish

Image/Appearance: A tall, pale man with flaming red hair and cold blue eyes. Jamie looks older than his 23 years, gaunt and lean. He dresses casually, although he does own a fine suit.

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Personality: Cold, precise, brutal, all would perfectly describe Jamie. The small-time gangster knows no God other than Power, and he’s a fervent worshipper with offerings of traitors and foes standing under the Thames in concrete shoes. Jamie is focused solely on advancing in the world, and will readily crack heads to make a point.

He’s also a believer in Peace Through Strength, perverting the old American slogan to his goals. Jamie is capable of using his Kaiju to make statements, and will lay waste to entire cities to make a point. However, Jamie does have morals, and seldom feels a need for such theatrics. More likely, he would raze military centers if he wanted to demonstrate his power.

Jamie also has a deep respect for his father, a gangster much like his son. One of his foremost goals is to free his dad, and unite his parents once again. He regularly visits his aging mother, and brings food he himself prepared.

Backstory: Jamie entered crime before he was out of high school, swiftly becoming just as feared as his father. Many a foe in his circle of smugglers found themselves rudely awoken, swiftly interrogated, and disposed of. However, Jamie also knew to reward his loyal followers with the cuts that would have gone to the traitors, for himself only taking a moderate cut.

This would serve him well when his father was arrested, his own men pooling their funds to buy the elder Mason the finest lawyer in London. He still went to prison, but the gang- and Jamie- knew who they served. In the wake of the arrest, Jamie Mason turned his attention to expanding the smuggling ring, and as of the time he obtained his beast Jamie was already sitting on a good-sized nest egg.

Goals:
  • Free his father
  • Become the wealthiest man in Britain
  • Conquer the world
  • Defeat or ally with the other wielders of Kaiju

Opinions on other people with monsters: Potential allies, although Jamie also believes that he can never truly trust anyone with the power to challenge him.

Opinions on your monster: Surprisingly fond of his Kaiju- Jamie won’t risk its life, and enjoys using its power. He’ll often fly Draco around for the sheer joy of it.

Home Base: A small flat just outside of London.


Monster Sheet
Name: Draco

Appearance: A titanic, serpentine reptile with black, crocodilian hide and glowing red markings. Draco has four rows of short frills running down its body, and just behind the skull multiple ribs extend into joined ‘claws’ that support a vast wing membrane. The beast’s body is long and flexible enough to coil around battleships and skyscrapers. Draco’s head is dinosaurian, built squarely enough to be used as a blunt weapon in battle.

Size: Roughly 150 meters long, and snakelike in proportion.

Attacks:
  • Mouth Attack: Fanged Jaws- Draco’s maw is full of needlelike teeth, made to puncture flesh and bone easily.
  • Claw Attack: Clawed Wings- The ribbed wings that sprout from Draco’s sides are tipped with slashing talons capable of shearing metal with ease.
  • Foot Attack: Tail Constrict- In lieu of limbs, Draco can use its long body and tail in order to choke out and crush Kaiju.
  • Special Attack: Incendiary Flyby- Draco can unleash a stream of biological napalm from its jaws and wingtips, which readily ignites. Said flames can smother a small city in choking smoke and ashes.

Strengths:
  • Flying abilities (capable of Mach. 4)
  • Agility
  • Fireproof
  • Tough
  • Dexterous body

Weaknesses:
  • Deep water
  • Being grounded
  • Grapples where Draco isn’t in control
  • Extreme cold



Place of Emergence: Ben Nevis, the largest mountain in Britain and Ireland.
 
Name:Alex

Country of Origin:USA

Ethnicity:White

Image/Appearance:(Tried to put in image,it failed XD)

Age:22

Gender:Male

Personality:Seems nice but is evil and will kill without thought,hates everyone who opposes him

Backstory:A intelligent person,but his over confidence can be his downfall

Goals:To shape the world in his image,make everything perfect in his eyes

Opinions on other people with monsters:He thinks they are unworthy,that they try to play god...That he should be the only heir of a new age

Opinions on your monster:He thinks of his monster as a blessing to help him,and that its a bane of anything holy

Home Base:Nomadic

Monster Sheet
Name:Raitoītā (Light Eater)

Appearance:Seems to be a hybrid,amalgamous body...A creature of pure evil

Size:Above 2000 feet

Attacks:
  • Mouth Attack:Bite
  • Claw Attack:Tendril slash
  • Foot Attack:Tendril whip
  • Special Attack:Acid spit,tongue grab,absorb
Strengths:Darkness,Raitoītā likes dark places it uses its tendrils to feel and attack

Weaknesses:Too much light,will slowly rot if exposed for to long

Place of Emergence:The core of the earth,the amount of evil created by the people of earth caused Raitoītā to form
 
Name:Alex

Country of Origin:USA

Ethnicity:White

Image/Appearance:(Tried to put in image,it failed XD)

Age:22

Gender:Male

Personality:Seems nice but is evil and will kill without thought,hates everyone who opposes him

Backstory:A intelligent person,but his over confidence can be his downfall

Goals:To shape the world in his image,make everything perfect in his eyes

Opinions on other people with monsters:He thinks they are unworthy,that they try to play god...That he should be the only heir of a new age

Opinions on your monster:He thinks of his monster as a blessing to help him,and that its a bane of anything holy

Home Base:Nomadic

Monster Sheet
Name:Raitoītā (Light Eater)

Appearance:Seems to be a hybrid,amalgamous body...A creature of pure evil

Size:Above 2000 feet

Attacks:
  • Mouth Attack:Bite
  • Claw Attack:Tendril slash
  • Foot Attack:Tendril whip
  • Special Attack:Acid spit,tongue grab,absorb
Strengths:Darkness,Raitoītā likes dark places it uses its tendrils to feel and attack

Weaknesses:Too much light,will slowly rot if exposed for to long

Place of Emergence:The core of the earth,the amount of evil created by the people of earth caused Raitoītā to form
I’m afraid this sheet doesn’t follow my restrictions. His personality, goals and backstory are extremely short, as opposed to what I was looking for (multi-paragraph). There’s also a few spelling and grammar issues.

Appearance of your monster is not really detailed enough for me to get a good image of it. The size is also way too big- it’s about twice the size of the Empire State Building. Kaiju should be in the region of 132 to 198 feet tall. It also has three special attacks as opposed to one, which is too many for a starter monster. The strengths and weaknesses section should be lengthened. And Raitoītā shouldn’t have an origin- these monsters were just laying about.
 
I’m interested in joining in with the RP. Giant Monsters are usually fun.
 
Name: Konstantin Kaiser
Country of Origin: German
Ethnicity: Germanic
Age: 21
Gender: Male

Image/Appearance: For his age, Konstantin looks scruffy and world-weary. With fair skin, mousy brown hair, a somewhat flat face with a square jaw and eyes of light grey, he could easily blend into a crowd with no passerby giving him a second glance, were it not for his status. He stands at an unimposing 5’8” with a slightly squat build, though all of him looks quite well trained. Konstantin has grown out somewhat of a beard to take away from his boyish looks.

Personality: Before the the Kaijus, had you asked people around him what they thought- if they had ever given him thought in the first place - they likely would have said Konstantin was quiet, unassuming, but perfectly pleasant, earnest and hard-working. Much of that still holds true now, but the enormous pressures on him have certainly taken a toll; He acts flatly and terse, moving from one responsibility to the next with hardly any time to rest.

There seems to be little that still brings joy to Konstantin’s life; even when he’s forced into downtime to mentally recover, he feels too guilty about what he could be doing to enjoy it. A small legion of mental health professionals is constantly at hand to safeguard his well-being, considering the damage and loss of life that could occur were he ever to snap. Konstantin, for his part, seems confident that this would never happen, but he is clearly working himself to the bone.

He is an abject pacifist and it frankly never even occurred to him to use his gift for his own gain. He keeps his Kaiju far from any population centers whenever possible, so that no one can even accidentally fall victim. He detests having to fight other Kaijus for this reason; every death from collateral damage weighs heavily on his mind, to say nothing of the tens of thousands of displaced refugees the destruction entails.

Backstory: Before the Day of Awakening, Konstantin led the conventional life of a second-year college student in Köln, having thrown in his lot with Geisteswissenschaften (Humanities and Anthropology). Coming from a poor but tight-knit family with a mother, father and two siblings, he worked the counter at a tabletop gaming hobbyshop part-time to pay for accommodations and what little else he needed (colleges, after all, being free to attend in Germany).

Frankly, Konstantin was a nerd through-and-through, rarely going out or making many friends, though he cherished the ones he had. He spent most of his spare time indoors, gaming or reading, building and painting miniatures or model sets, but neither his grades or his health ever suffered from it. He was studious, attentive, and went on long runs and did weekend football to keep himself in shape.

He was quite content with the idea that he would never be anyone of note, as he had never appreciated being in the spotlight- a notion which he believes, in hindsight, may have been tempting fate. On that day where the world went into turmoil and he awoke with a psychic connection to one of the monstrosities, he became a person of global interest, and had to grapple with the consequences his gift had for millions of lives. He ended up allying with the quickly formed European Emergency Command (EEC), who seemed the closest thing to “good guys” available, though he does not blindly follow their word.

Goals:
  • To safeguard the lives of, ideally, everyone on Earth (but, practically, it ends up mostly being those within the purview of the EEC) against rampaging Kaijus and their controllers, and other forces of oppression and war.
  • To grow the numbers of controllers and their Kaiju who ally themselves with the “fight for good”, and form a league that stands as one against those who use their gift to tyrannize and murder.
  • Ultimately, he wants the world rebalanced; a world without strife, where the Kaijus would only be a source of good for all (imagine the terraforming these monsters could do to restore the climate!).

Opinions on other people with monsters:
Twofold - He holds a deep-seated disgust for those who use their Kaijus to commit acts of genocide and establish tyrannies, but has nothing but appreciation for those like him who use them to protect human lives.

Opinions on your monster: Konstantin felt immensely cursed at first, almost betrayed that it had to have happened to him out of seven billion human beings on Earth. As he learned to make use of his Kaiju, though, he began to appreciate the beast’s qualities, and even became affectionate. Logically he knows that humanity was far better off without the Kaijus, but the next best thing is using his to build a better world and convincing others to do the same.

Home Base: The EEC Titan Kontrollbasis in former Wilhelmshaven, on the northwestern German Coast. An enormous vertical hangar allows Konstantin’s Kaiju to idle half-submerged and be studied up close.

~~~

Monster Sheet
Name: “Taloncrest” by official designation, commonly shortened to just “Talon”.

Appearance: Decidedly alien in every metric, the Kaiju is sextuple-limbed; a powerful pair of digitigrade, three-toed legs carries an enormous torso covered in carapace that thickens into sharp protrusions on the backside. A pair of long, bisegmented lower arms are nearly always touching the ground to offer further carrying support. Two of three fingers touch the ground on each of these arms, while the third has developed into a stake-like talon. On the underside of the lower arm are set five small, sharp plates of increasing size. This general build gives the Kaiju a gorilla-like method of locomotion.

The last two upper limbs are nestled above the shoulders of the first and are shorter, ending not in a hand but in pick-shaped blades, some 35 meters in length from point to point. These arms are not as mobile or useful as the larger arms, but can snap forward or backward at high velocity in a similar fashion to a praying mantis. They are also used in tandem with the lower arms when the Kaiju is climbing sheer rock faces, acting like icepicks. The ‘tail’ consists of a broad, two pronged plate.

The creature’s head is small relative to its body, with one pair of larger eyes and three pairs of smaller eyes set above the larger, tapering up towards a blunt horn that bridges to the back of the skull and reconnects there. The jagged edges of its carapace by the mouth seem to function as incisors. Behind the larger eyes are greater openings that may serve other senses such as hearing, smell, and infrared radiation.

Size:
56 meters in height from its toes to the peak of the highest dorsal plate, in idle pose.
121 meters in length from snout to tailtip.

Attacks:
Biologists have hypothesized that in its natural environment (wherever that may be), Taloncrest would dig itself in until only the dorsal plates were visible (resembling a large rock outcropping to the unfamiliar) and when prey came near, rapidly pierce and restrain it with the blade appendages, using the talons on the lower arms and its mouth to kill. The main counterargument to this “ambush predator” theory is the fact that Taloncrest seems perfectly happy to take on other Kaiju face-to-face. From its hind legs it can leap and pounce like a big cat, all blades extended.
  • Mouth Attack: The beast’s jagged maw rips through flesh like a saw.
  • Claw Attack: Has stakes on its hands, enormous blade appendages, three talons per foot, ten smaller arm-protruding blades, a two-pronged tails and other hard, sharp edges all over its carapace; It is therefore difficult to grapple the beast without massive collateral damage to one’s own body.
  • Special Attack: Taloncrest’s vocal cords are capable of creating ultra-low-frequency, supersonically amplified reverberations that end up being close in volume to your average volcanic explosion. At close range, it can ravage cities- and debilitate foes. It’s not an ability it uses often, especially not in combat, as it requires some time to build up.
Strengths:
Large parts of the Kaiju’s body (the chest region and inner sides of its limbs are exceptions) are covered in a carapace with a chrome-like appearance and a thickness ranging from a few feet to several meters. The molecular structure bears similarities to dense bone, but contains large amounts of various metals, and it ultimately offers sublime protection from physical attacks and several other forms of damage. The talons are made from even stranger material; both metallic and crystalline in nature, constantly chipping to reveal new sharp edges. Thanks to its many

From the method by which it arrived, it is assumed Taloncrest is immune to freezing temperatures (having survived at 2.7 degrees above absolute zero before) , and does not require oxygen.

Weaknesses:
Due to the metallic nature of its carapace, Taloncrest is weak to attacks of an electromagnetic nature, which bypass its armor and damage him directly. It also does not particularly like to be overheated, since it transfers heat well. The parts of its body not covered in the carapace are as susceptible to damage as the average Kaiju’s skin. Although it can leap and climb well , Taloncrest is comparatively a slow sprinter and inflexible in its movements.

Place of Emergence:
On the Day of Awakening, among the earthquakes, tsunamis and volcanic eruptions already taking place due to Kaiju unearthings, an unexpected sighting was also made of an object in intrasolar space; 40 meters in diameter and headed directly for Earth. Hours later it touched down in the Alps, leaving a threehundred meter wide crater and producing a shockwave that was felt throughout every region bordering the mountain range.

Preliminary aerial scouting missions reported that in the middle of all the devastation, another of the tentatively named “Kaiju” had unfolded itself among the meteor shards as if from an egg, yet fully formed. Whereas most Kaiju are thought to have slumbered under mountains or seabeds for millions of years of Earth’s history, it is unknown what place the origin of Taloncrest is, how long it had been hurtling through the void, and why it happened to make it to Earth at all, let alone on the same day all other Kaijus happened to awaken on.

A theory has been put forward that the close Earth approach of Taloncrest may have been what pushed other long buried Kaijus out of their slumber, but not a single piece of evidence has been found to support this- Taloncrest does not seem to be treated any differently by other Kaijus.
 
I'm currently brainstorming my character and while I think I have a good idea for the human I'm having a bit of a hard time deciding the type of monster should go with them.
 
I'm currently brainstorming my character and while I think I have a good idea for the human I'm having a bit of a hard time deciding the type of monster should go with them.
(Same,tbh since im doing insectoid...I was probably going to have a centipede like kaiju)
 
I'm currently brainstorming my character and while I think I have a good idea for the human I'm having a bit of a hard time deciding the type of monster should go with them.
Well, here’s a few ideas of mine that might help you out:
  1. A gigantic, seemingly normal dinosaur kaiju, but when struck it absorbs the kinetic energy to be redirected at foes.
  2. A statue-like humanoid, armored with scaly plates and sporting a twisted scowl.
  3. A winged kaiju, sort of like a titanic bird of sorts with the power to bring adverse weather.

 
(Actually,does anyone have a example that i could see how to order the bio?)

Here’s my sheet. A little ways above, you can see MrReaves’s sheet as well, which I consider pretty good.
Character Sheet
Name: Jamie Mason

Country of Origin: Britain

Ethnicity: Irish

Image/Appearance: A tall, pale man with flaming red hair and cold blue eyes. Jamie looks older than his 23 years, gaunt and lean. He dresses casually, although he does own a fine suit.

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Personality: Cold, precise, brutal, all would perfectly describe Jamie. The small-time gangster knows no God other than Power, and he’s a fervent worshipper with offerings of traitors and foes standing under the Thames in concrete shoes. Jamie is focused solely on advancing in the world, and will readily crack heads to make a point.

He’s also a believer in Peace Through Strength, perverting the old American slogan to his goals. Jamie is capable of using his Kaiju to make statements, and will lay waste to entire cities to make a point. However, Jamie does have morals, and seldom feels a need for such theatrics. More likely, he would raze military centers if he wanted to demonstrate his power.

Jamie also has a deep respect for his father, a gangster much like his son. One of his foremost goals is to free his dad, and unite his parents once again. He regularly visits his aging mother, and brings food he himself prepared.

Backstory: Jamie entered crime before he was out of high school, swiftly becoming just as feared as his father. Many a foe in his circle of smugglers found themselves rudely awoken, swiftly interrogated, and disposed of. However, Jamie also knew to reward his loyal followers with the cuts that would have gone to the traitors, for himself only taking a moderate cut.

This would serve him well when his father was arrested, his own men pooling their funds to buy the elder Mason the finest lawyer in London. He still went to prison, but the gang- and Jamie- knew who they served. In the wake of the arrest, Jamie Mason turned his attention to expanding the smuggling ring, and as of the time he obtained his beast Jamie was already sitting on a good-sized nest egg.

Goals:
  • Free his father
  • Become the wealthiest man in Britain
  • Conquer the world
  • Defeat or ally with the other wielders of Kaiju

Opinions on other people with monsters: Potential allies, although Jamie also believes that he can never truly trust anyone with the power to challenge him.

Opinions on your monster: Surprisingly fond of his Kaiju- Jamie won’t risk its life, and enjoys using its power. He’ll often fly Draco around for the sheer joy of it.

Home Base: A small flat just outside of London.


Monster Sheet
Name: Draco

Appearance: A titanic, serpentine reptile with black, crocodilian hide and glowing red markings. Draco has four rows of short frills running down its body, and just behind the skull multiple ribs extend into joined ‘claws’ that support a vast wing membrane. The beast’s body is long and flexible enough to coil around battleships and skyscrapers. Draco’s head is dinosaurian, built squarely enough to be used as a blunt weapon in battle.

Size: Roughly 150 meters long, and snakelike in proportion.

Attacks:
  • Mouth Attack: Fanged Jaws- Draco’s maw is full of needlelike teeth, made to puncture flesh and bone easily.
  • Claw Attack: Clawed Wings- The ribbed wings that sprout from Draco’s sides are tipped with slashing talons capable of shearing metal with ease.
  • Foot Attack: Tail Constrict- In lieu of limbs, Draco can use its long body and tail in order to choke out and crush Kaiju.
  • Special Attack: Incendiary Flyby- Draco can unleash a stream of biological napalm from its jaws and wingtips, which readily ignites. Said flames can smother a small city in choking smoke and ashes.

Strengths:
  • Flying abilities (capable of Mach. 4)
  • Agility
  • Fireproof
  • Tough
  • Dexterous body

Weaknesses:
  • Deep water
  • Being grounded
  • Grapples where Draco isn’t in control
  • Extreme cold



Place of Emergence: Ben Nevis, the largest mountain in Britain and Ireland.
 
Name: Alex Tellron

Country of Origin: America

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Image/Appearance: Tall,with long messy blond ish hair.Alex stands at around 6'2,his eyes are blue and he usually wears a hoodie,wears glasses

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Personality: Evil, vile, and intelligent, Which is all that would describe Alex. The student at a school for entomology and knows almost everything that mankind has to offer, he was a orphan at the age of 8 with nothing but his clothes and living under a concrete bridge. Alex strived on being of higher intelligence, and will prove himself to others. Most people regard him as the most brilliant mind, except a select few who where usually put aside by their superiors.

He also learned how to trick people to getting what he wants, not caring if others are hurt in the process. Alex will use his Kaiju to show his place, destroying cities out of boredom if he so wanted. But Alex prefers to watch all those who oppose him suffer, and will put on a show to do so. No man, woman, or child is safe from him.

Alex has never felt pain before,even though being a orphan was lonely, never having cried out due to rage, he feels as though this was his destiny to be a monster and destroy all those around him. He usually tries to stay hidden after he attacks.

Backstory: Alex entered a university of entomology before passing all the exams without error, becoming top tier to most people. He never cared about having friends because he thought everyone was just a pawn in his game.

This would leave him in a state of depression after learning that he was turned down by his boss, for once Alex actually felt pain, but he loved every second of it to the point that it almost drove him mad. He became a alcoholic and managed to escape his depression after 2 years, Alex Tellron eventually gathered a following from his old classmates and spread his knowledge across the world, remaining a threat to all before he even met his Kaiju.

Goals:
  • Proving himself as the greatest mind
  • Destroying all those who oppose him
  • Spreading his knowledge to like-minded individuals

Opinions on other people with monsters: Always treats them as a enemy,nothing more,nothing less.

Opinions on your monster: Alex loves his Kaiju,which is the first thing he ever loved.

Home Base: A abandoned university outside of West Virginia


Monster Sheet
Name: Ōkunoashinokirā (Many legged killer)

Appearance: A large, centipede like Kaiju, with a tough exoskeleton and dark stripes of red. Ōkunoashinokirā has spikes running down the side of its body, and large mandibles to bite and inject venom into its prey, His body is long and thin so he can get through wide canyons, and his exoskeleton is flexible.

Size: Roughly 120 meters long,and with a centipod body to match.

Attacks:
  • Mouth Attack: Venomous mandibles- Ōkunoashinokirā mandibles are sharp and tough, perfect for grabbing and injecting venom.
  • Claw Attack: Centipod rush- Ōkunoashinokirā sides are covered with spikes capable of tearing through flesh with ease.
  • Foot Attack: Strangle- Ōkunoashinokirā's long body can be used to wrap around other Kaijus and strangle them.
  • Special Attack: Neurotoxic venom- This only works if Ōkunoashinokirā bites another Kaiju, the venom affects the nervous system and shuts it down slowly, if said venom is not treated then the Kaijus insides will turn into liquid.

Strengths:
  • Venom proof- Cannot be affected by other venomous Kaijus
  • Agility- Its multiple legs allow it to run at blinding speeds
  • Powerful exoskeleton- Resistant to most attacks
  • Flexible body- Is good at making evasive maneuvers

Weaknesses:
  • Lightning
  • Its long body makes it easier to pin down
  • Changes in air pressure
  • Place of Emergence: The colorado deserts, one of the most hostile environments on earth.
 
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(I hope i made the cut XD)
It’s pretty good, but could definitely use some cleanup with regards to grammar and punctuation. There’s also quite a few spacing issues.

Personality and backstory could be lengthened a bit.

Overall, a good first draft! Shouldn’t take too long to fix up.
 

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