Name: Lothar Hilvarn
Role: Sorcerer
Age: 60
Gender: male
Appearance:
Lothar is an old man with Long grey hair and a big bushy grey beard. He is quite tall around 6'0 and slender.
Good Personality:
Loyal: He is devoted to the cause of delivering the princess to safety and protecting her...
I just realized a pretty big mistake in your bio, which is an excellent bio in my opinion! But the mistake is you said the imperial spy was searching for clues if the upcoming rebellion, but this rp takes place during the old republic where it's the republic not the rebels.
Appearance:
Name: Kristen (Leons's daughter)
Nickname: Kris
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual
Personality: kind, loving, trusting, and caring.
Likes: her father, boys her age, and other girls.
Dislikes: raiders, mutants, and Ceaser's legion.
Bio/history...
Appearance:
Name: Leon Gray
Age: 40
Gender: Male
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual.
Personality: Protective, distrusting, does anything he has to do to protect his daughter and survive.
Likes: His daughter, NCR, and eating.
Dislikes: raiders, Ceaser's legion, and super mutants...
Looking good, can you make a backstory first then we can start. Only has to be 2 paragraphs. Also I posted in the original link I sent you, that you have to be able to write at least 3 paragraphs per post, is that ok? It doesn't always have to be 3 paragraphs it can be less but I'd prefer 3.
Appearance:
Name: Jax
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual
Personality: a Loner, Quiet, distant, calm, and collected
Likes: Nothing and no one.
Dislikes: Raiders, NCR, and Ceaser's legion.
Bio/history: Jax was born in the middle of the wastes to two poor...
Appearance:
Face and hair.
Armor and mask.
Name: Quintilianus Severinus
Nickname: quin
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual
Personality: Cruel, untrusting, hardened, sarcastic, and has a very dry sense of humor .
Likes: Ceaser, Ceaser's Legion, drinking...
Thanks for the feedback it's awesome. I'll do my best to improve, but one thing I must say is that I'm on ipad so I wasn't capitalizing the proper nouns purely out of laziness.
Name: Darth Hyperious (Hyal jhen)
Race: Sith Pureblood
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Appearance (picture allowed):
(Man on the left is Darth Hyperious)
Weaknesses: Fighting opponents with duel sabers, fighting open ants with curved handled sabers, and severe fear that his apprentice will...